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Jay Smith
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Jay Smith
« Thread Started on Apr 17, 2008, 5:14pm »

Ill finish this tomorrow, got to go...Sorry!

The Roleplayer;;

Name: Luke
Age: 15
Time Zone: GMT- England
Experience: About a year and a half
How did you find us?: Forfear
Code Word: Arrowhead
RP Sample:

Jay walked through the corridor, his bag slung over his shoulder. He put his hands in his pockets and was thinking what class he had next when he felt something hit his legs. Before he had time to prevent anything he had fallen flat on his face. The large crowd in the corridor burst into laughter at the sight of him. Jay felt the blood rush to his cheeks as he pushed himself of the floor. "Who did that!" he said, feeling angry and embarrassed.

Immediately a large boy in his year stepped forward. He had large muscles and an ugly, smug look on his face. Jay recognized him as a boy in the year above him, who had the power of super strength. Jay heard him answer Me, and what are you going to do about it. Jay immediately regretted the tone in his voice, if there was someone in the school he didn't want to start a fight with, it was him. 'hes going to tear me limb from limb!' he thought desperately to himself.

He tried to say something, but words failed him as the boy strode confidently toward him. Jay glanced around the corridor and saw a bench... he had to do something now, or he wouldn't stand a chance. He held out his arm, pointing to the bench, and in one swift movement bring his arm over pointing toward the boy. Immediately the bench soared through the air and hit the boy directly in the chest, forcing him to the floor.

There was a low groan from the people around him as they formed a circle around him. Jay watched, nervously as the boy picked up the chair, and snapped it in two as if it were a mere twig. Hoist them over his head and throw them toward Jay. Jay concentrated as hard as he could, and one half of the bench that had been ripped in two stopped in mid air and fell to the floor, but the other hit him in the stomach and sent him soaring through the air. He landed with a crash on the floor, his head was throbbing but he wasn't seriously hurt.

He looked up, his vision slightly blurred, and saw the boy running full pelt toward him. Jay raised his hand and the boy stopped running on the spot. He was being lifted slightly in the air...but he was too heavy, Jay couldn't move him properly. Jay then focused on moving him, and sent him moving like a bullet into the lockers. There was a loud crash as he hit the metal... but he wasn't hurt. The boy pulled himself out of the locker- leaving a large dent- but at that moment a loud voice called enough Jay looked up, thank god- it was the head teacher come with me...Both of you Jay felt relieved- he had been lucky this time.

The Character;;

Character Full Name: Jay Smith
Age: 16
School year:
Gender: Male
Sexual Orientation: Straight
Job: (adults only)
Group: Hero
Power: telekinesis (ability to move objects using the mind)
Celeb Face: Alex Pettyfer
Canon or Original?: Original

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Appearance: Jay has medium length blond hair, and quite a pale skin tone. He has dark brown eyes, but sometimes they look slightly green. He is fairly skinny, and has well defined muscles. He is quite tall, and stands at 6 foot 3 inches.

Personality:

Jay is a quiet, and fairly share boy. He doesnt let many people get close to him, and sticks to a close few friends. He is always scared of making a fool of himself, and things like save the citizen make him very nervouse, as he is scared of messing up whilst everyone is watching him.

History:

When Jay was younger he showed his powers at an early age, and his parents were extremely proud, and relieved, when they found out. They, his parents, had walked into the kitchen one evening to find pet dog flying across the room. It was then they thought he had inherited his mothers power, telekenisis. Something that his mother was very proud of. And though his father was a little dissapointed, he soon got over it.

When Jay got to school he found himself quite allot behind allot of the other students. He had so far only managed to move small objects with his mind, and it was because of this that he only just scraped into hero class. When the instucter asked him what his powers were, he nervously replied with i can move objects...with my mind i mean And a boulder was instantly dropped toward him. He managed stop the bpulder for long enough to escape, and therefor was granted a hero.

When at school, Jay found his powers progressed very quickly and he could soon move large objects with his mind, aswell as small objects. He progressed quickly in all subjects, and eventually quickly caught up with everyone else, And he even surpassed most students in most of his classes.
Family:
How you got your power: Inherited it
Strengths:
Jay does well in all his classes
He is very ambitious
He learns quickly
He
Weaknesses:
Jay is hot headed, and can react with out thinking
He hates being the center of attention- and can get nervous when he is
He sometimes doubts whether he will live up to the standard his parents have set him, and can get very paranoid about it.
He finds it hard to get close to someone, and finds it hard talking to new people.
Likes:
Talking with friends
Learning new things
Being outside
Doing something- anything
Chocolate
Dislikes:
Being bored
Being stuck inside
Being the centre of attention
Making a fool of himself
Fears:
Death- Of himself, or family
Public humiliation
Flaws: (what do you meen?)
Anything else: Nope

« Last Edit: Apr 20, 2008, 9:28am by Jay Smith »

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Re: Jay Smith
« Reply #1 on Apr 22, 2008, 10:12pm »

Okay just a few things...

- I do like your application, I'd just like it better if the personality was longer. And maybe a bit longer history as well.
- ^that is really a suggestion, since at the moment I really want members. tehe.
- The flaws. Example: My character is very sarcastic and it can sometimes get annoying. And she has many burn marks all over her body. Also she can be very rude sometimes. While other times she is way too forgiving. And she has bad eyesight. (things like that)

SO besides all that, I'll gladly accept you. Just get those fixed. But...

A C C E P T E D !

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Re: Jay Smith
« Reply #2 on Apr 24, 2008, 5:15pm »

Thanks, and ill do that. But im going to wait untill the weekend first so i will have more time to do it.

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